Friday, October 19, 2012

Student News!!!!!!!!!!

                                                  



                                                  Card Board Bikes In Africa????

              As i read this article the author was amazed by the creation. as the author tells about the iventor he speaks very highly of him. he says things like(Gafni 's workshop a ramshackle garden shed is typically the sort of place where legendary inventions are born).


                Their was lot of details in this article such as when mr. Gafni's was first attempting to do this project  he failed serveral  of times but he never gave up. also he haid to test soo much cardboard just to finde  the right one. mr. Gafni's said it took him   a year and a half. one quote that stood out  to me was (Gafni's said he immersed a cross section  in a water tank for several months and it retains all its hardened characteristic) that makes the card board harding.


                    I think this topic was very interesting. cause i never heard of a bike made out of card board. Yes this article changed my respective. its changed my respectic cause when i first saw it i was like this might be boaring but comes to find out it was a ok. i think this is a very important  topic


                   I can kind of relate to this. i can relate to this cause my brother and i made a three wheel bmx bike. i never saw anything like it.  it took time and hard work to creat the bike. i was happy when we finally got finish and was able to drive                    

1 comment:

  1. Donte,

    You've got the basic organizational format, but you need to do a better job summarizing the article in the beginning. Assume that your reader has not read the article and be sure to include the title and author in the 1st sentence. 80

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